My AirBnb Blog - plz tell what you think maybe share/comment

Blog - RentingLock
From some time I wrote a blog about AirBnB.
Now I like to make it a bit more public, can you guys tell me what you think about it?
Maybe you think some other way of writing is better then that what I making,
Got your fav bloggers?

  • i still looking for inspiration

Here is my blog:

plz comment like/shere or smght :stuck_out_tongue:

The content is good. Interesting and useful stories for those considering becoming Air hosts.

Let me say up front that I’m a Grammar Nazi.:scream: I spent 35 years as a science and technical writer and editor, magazine and book author and editor, and more. Grammar matters to me – a lot. IMHO, correct grammar says a great deal about a person and their attention to detail

Then let me say, politely, that your grammar, sentence structure and word choices need some work. It’s not BAD, but it could be so much better.

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Thanks for opinion, Im looking for someone like you because my national lenague is not english so I still learning.
Hearing for someone who spent 35 years as editor and writer that my writing is “not bad” is big compliment to me.
Thanks agian, can I send you mabe my new tekst before published? :blush:

Sure – you’re welcome to send me things to look at. My outside email is
kenhulme at mindspring dot com

My Rentinglock does not want to take the synchronisation code and I have called and emailed Rentinglock. I have not had a response from them to date. WHAT DO I DO?